Sunrise Eyes – Friday Fictioneers

© Roger Bultot

Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here.

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sunrise eyes

sunrise eyes
shine at the prospect the promise
of another day of love and adventure
I admire I envy
your capacity for life
your ability to embrace each moment
as though it may be the last you ever live
but it terrifies me too
because I see
my lack of imagination of vision of spirit
and I worry
that it threatens to suffocate your joie de vivre
and I know that all too soon
the time will come
when you have to leave me
before the light in your
sunrise eyes dies

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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5 Responses to Sunrise Eyes – Friday Fictioneers

  1. Dear CE,
    One of your best. Bittersweet.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

  2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

    Damfine writing, C.E. The vulnerability is what gets to me. Something nobody wants to admit: fear.

  3. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H-H says:

    Transform to moon, that reflects the sun’s light, and glows each phase, and stay, yah?

  4. jenne49's avatar jenne49 says:

    Beautifully sad, and with sounds that echo the mood.

  5. achingly good, mate

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