Colonisation – Friday Fictioneers

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Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here.
My apologies for my recent lengthy absence, and lack of response to previous comments.
I was on my annual visit to Scotland, with other priorities,

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Colonisation

As I lift the hand-towel from the washing-machine, I’m annoyed to see it still bears traces of blood.
My blood.
I smile ruefully as I recall that, just a few weeks ago, Sandra Crook, my favourite Fictioneer, laughingly agreed that recently her body count has been higher than mine.
Although there was one undeserving pooch…
But last night’s death was well-merited.
When I saw the intruder’s shadow, my reaction was swift and deadly.
I killed without hesitation or remorse.
I await the usual outcry about needless slaughter from my readers.
I don’t care.
Drink my blood and die, Madame Mosquito.


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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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7 Responses to Colonisation – Friday Fictioneers

  1. Ange's avatar Ange says:

    🤣 I love how you cleverly create a dark, sinister setup and then transform it with a funny twist about killing a mosquito🦟🙌

  2. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    I won’t kill anything, I don’t believe in it. Except mosquitos. That’s always justified, even if they haven’t bitten yet!

  3. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

    Fun twist, welcome back.

  4. Given the prompt, I could observe that even mosquitoes are god’s creatures, but that would be pushing saintliness further than I dare

  5. Dear CE,
    Justifiable homicide IMHO. Good one.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

  6. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    Insidious creatures.

  7. margaretr13's avatar margaretr13 says:

    Ah! Normal service has been resumed!

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