The Unicorn Challenge.
A magical new weekly writing opportunity from her – Jenne Gray – and me.
Visit her blog every Friday to see the photo prompt, and post your amazing story in her comments section.
Or on your own blog, and stick the link down in her comments.
The rules are:
Maximum of 250 words.
Based on photo prompt.
That’s it.
To hear me read my story, just click here:
The Dip
He doesn’t look very happy.
Nor do his three associates, each coming towards me from a different angle.
I might have blundered badly here.
You see, this is Monaco, not Medville, so the pickings are that much richer here, more so even than St Tropez.
This, of course, means that there is also a greater element of danger.
The season is nearly over, so I felt I needed a nest egg to get me through the winter.
It was either that or go to Milan or Paris, where I am rather too well known.
You see, I’m a pick-pocket, although I prefer to think of myself as a dip, which is a bit classier, and you’d have to agree that the way I lifted this wallet from that lady was pretty classy.
But, as I say, here the risks are higher, and it appears that I might have been overly casual, not spotting until too late that it contains an electronic tracker.
And the lady has these friends or, more probably, employees, who are now smiling coldly at me.
This gentleman has a certain air about him, which makes me suspect that the punishment is going to be quite immediate, and very severe.
I wonder if I can interest him in a deal of some sort.
Nah.
He doesn’t look very happy.
Oh snap!
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You seem to have survived to tell the tale, not just nimble fingers but nimble feet too!
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Oh dear… run!
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Oh, he’d better think fast. I can see those ‘three associates’ getting closer with every second, and I suspect he’s right that they won’t be interested in a ‘deal’. I really like the voice in this. Excellent.
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Blasted newfangled gadgets!
I’m not writing off the dip just yet.
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Yes, but I suspect the accomplished and classy ‘dip’ you paint so deftly has got himself out of worse scenarios in his past.
I believe he’ll live to ‘dip’ again another day, maybe in the very way you don’t describe so effectively here… but on the lookout for electronic trackers.
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