The Low Road – Friday Fictioneers

© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here.

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The Low Road

The highway is straight and empty, and very boring.
The sides drop down to a stony arid wasteland, not a good place to go.
I haven’t seen another vehicle in an hour, or about 70 miles.
I’m struggling to stay awake, but I have to keep going.
What I’m running from is even less palatable.
I won’t bore you with the details, but I’d rather walk across this desert than face it.
So I splash water on my face and glance in the rear-view mirror.
I see them, coming up fast.
Looks like I’ll be taking the Low Road home.


Note: Quick explanation for those of you not fortunate enough to be Scottish. The Low Road is the route taken back to Scotland by the spirit of one who dies abroad.

You might enjoy this version of the song.

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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4 Responses to The Low Road – Friday Fictioneers

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Very edgy- I feel irksome treble of defeat.

  2. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    In one way or another, a lot of these desert stories involve death.

  3. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H-H says:

    Puts a new spin on an old song, for me. Thanks. But what did he do and is there no other alternative?

  4. jenne49's avatar jenne49 says:

    So, of course, now my imagination’s in overdrive, wondering what he’s done.
    But whatever it is, and whoever they are, does he really deserve to go home by the low road?
    Nice one.

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