The Stake – Friday Fictioneers

AnElephantCant play with fire
That is one thing he long ago learnt
His Mummy always says
Stay away from the blaze
Or you will get your nice trunk badly burnt

Once again it is Friday Fictioneer time.
With Rochelle as a great beacon in the darkness, superior scribes spark sensational stories.
And AnElephant once again attempts to rise from the ashes.
The idea is to write a very short story, circa 100 words, based on this picture prompt (below).
That’s it.

Copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

The Stake

She always thought she was better than us.
So supercilious, so condescending.
Her name was Joan Dark, so of course we burned her at the stake.
Man, could she scream.
Not just foul words, but vile curses.
Danny hanged himself only three weeks later, lost his mind.
Then Hughie walked off the bridge.
It is a long way down.
He was practically a skeleton by then.
That just leaves me.
The nightmares are awful, but when I waken her screams still fill my head.
I put the pistol in my mouth.
And the screaming stops.
I hear her triumphal laughter.

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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21 Responses to The Stake – Friday Fictioneers

  1. anupat's avatar anupat says:

    scary it is!

  2. Wickedly cool story!

  3. BrainRants's avatar BrainRants says:

    Because the only thing that burns better than witches… are more witches.

  4. Wow, chilling stuff! Well done.

  5. shanx's avatar shanx says:

    oh my, a good one! Very well written.

  6. babso2you's avatar babso2you says:

    Good one! ^..^

  7. Really well written. A mini-horror story in 100 words. Wonderfully dark!

  8. Elephant, Dark but well written. Never burn someone who knows curses. O_0 Creepy. Well done. 🙂 —Susan

  9. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    Dear Elephant you are so cool
    And, I am no fool
    But I am laughing so hard
    That I dropped my dance card

    In that darn fire!

    My stupid attempt at poetry – I love yours! Nan 🙂

  10. emmylgant's avatar emmylgant says:

    AnElephantCan write quick
    Stories that make me shudder.
    This one is more awfuller
    ‘Cause it’s witchcraft
    T’is very scary magic
    Brrr! This tale is deathly daft.

  11. Such a powerful woman, that Joan. An amazing story in so few words!

  12. Yikes! Be careful who you burn. Very well told story in 100 words.

  13. Oh my, the darkness at the edge of the mind slowly overflows. Loved it.

  14. wmqcolby's avatar wmqcolby says:

    Whoa. Dark today with a chance of no moon. Perfect. Good job, Elephant!

  15. Dee's avatar Dee says:

    Dear Elephant this is such a dark and sombre tale and you have written it beautifully.
    Well done
    Dee

  16. Dark tale and a great read
    Siobhan

  17. Al's avatar Al says:

    Yeowch!! That was nice and gruesome and dark. Excellent.

  18. Dear Elephant,

    Oh so dark, but oh so well written.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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