Click here to hear the poet read his words:
you said yes
I saw you
standing with a group of friends
at the school gates
and when I plucked up my courage
you smiled and said yes
some time later
I left for university
I knew a girl like you
would have admirers
but when I asked if you’d wait
you smiled and said yes
time passed and I asked
the biggest question of all
and of course
you smiled and said yes
we lived happily then
but not ever after
I worked far away
and suffered loneliness
when I asked your forgiveness
for a terrible fault
you smiled and said yes
but then I was away
too far and too long
and mistake followed stupid mistake
I returned and saw
in your eyes
a different
deeper sadness
and when I asked
if there was someone else
you didn’t smile
but you said yes
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Beautiful. The pain and difficulty of deep and sustained connection expressed so well.
Thanks, Lindsey.
I find that most relationships have ups and (sometimes terminal) downs.
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AnElephantCant stop laughing
He says I’m as dumb as a rock
I’m not too sure
If he is so pure
But it seems he can turn back the clock
Better to look towards the future than turn back the clock.
But his rhymes were much more creative than yours.
He was more fun too, good Lady.
I miss him more than I can say.
What I liked about the elephant was that he never expected me to be ‘good’. In fact he rather enjoyed the opposite.
Yes, but AnElephant was AnAnimal…
The human condition laid bare.
You never shy away from the soreness of life.
Simply and poignantly written, beautifully crafted towards the final two lines.
If it doesn’t hurt, Jenne, then there is no point to it, is there?
Thanks for your kind words, much appreciated.