Tony, again – Friday Fictioneers

Friday Fictioneers is hosted by the wonderful Rochelle, the undisputed master of what I call Sound Bite Fiction.
She sets the weekly challenge, the standard, and the prompt photo.
The idea, as always, is to write a story of around 100 words based on the picture below, which this week is supplied by Jean L. Hays.

© Jean L. Hays

Click here to hear the author read his words:

 

 

Tony, again

I meet Portuguese Tony.
First time since confinement.
He is, as they say, tired and emotional, so rambling more than usual.
Which is a lot.
I ask about Rafa,
a mutual friend, ex-propriétaire of the little café in the square.
Tony excitedly slurs through an incomprehensible tale of guns and gangsters.
His French is excruciating.
Then his fingers make the shape of a gun.
Bam!
Who? I ask.
Rafa!
I shake my head, Rafa is a sweet guy, totally non-violent.
Then Tony, to my astonishment, utters the first English words I’ve ever heard from him.
He’s pushing up da fishes.

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52 Responses to Tony, again – Friday Fictioneers

  1. Hmmm…pushing up fishes…I’ve heard swimming with the fishes and pushing up daisies, but neer the two mixed.
    Ronda

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  2. Mike says:

    I did feel for the fish, 🙂

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  3. subroto says:

    Nice one, Tony is back amusing us all.

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  4. granonine says:

    I probably shouldn’t be laughing at poor Rafa, but that last line was hilarious 🙂

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  5. Bill says:

    Wonderfully told. Some messages are easily received in any language. Tony made it clear.

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  6. draliman says:

    “He’s pushing up da fishes” – well, he tried!

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  7. doodletllc says:

    I don’t know about Tony from France…seems I hear a hint of a Brooklyn accent in those lines…he is quite the character! A fun read.

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  8. Sounds like a good gangster movie. Hoping for a sequel.

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  9. James McEwan says:

    I wonder if you are mixing with the wrong crowd these days?

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  10. Tannille says:

    Yay the #savetony worked! I imagine his English gets lost in translation.

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  11. plaridel says:

    it looks like had a lot to drink already. 🙂

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  12. I love this story. Tony is very well characterized.

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  13. Poor Tony. Well, them fishes may not like being pushed, I say … 😉

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  14. Sandra says:

    Good to see him out and about again. Looks like he’s been practising his language skills during the lockdown. And a few other of his attributes.

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  15. Gabriella says:

    I love the portrayal of the different characters and the backdrop of your story. Do you live in France?

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  16. Liz Young says:

    Good for Tony – at least he tries to talk idiomatically!

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  17. Easy mistaka to maka, peixes e margaridas are easily confused!

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  18. elmowrites says:

    haha! I love the last line, Tony’s language skills are top notch, maybe he should practice those a little more than his aim!

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  19. Iain Kelly says:

    Everyone’s favourite gangster, glad to see Tony is flourishing, even in lockdown, and has managed to use the time to learn a new language!

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  20. What a great read! These are such vivid characters, CE.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  21. Dear CE,

    Now I’ll have that line running through my head, “Lou Cabrini sleeps wit da fishses.” LOL. Glad Tony’s working on his English. You made me laugh.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  22. It’s unjust that with Covid in the air, peeps should die of gun shots 😉 🙂 Lovely little piece that make me smile. 😀

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  23. Been watching too many gangster movies I think!! Good to see P Tony once more

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  24. neilmacdon says:

    And a delightfully poetic first stab at English it is

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