Full Moon – Sunday Photo Fiction

AnElephantCant just knock up a story
Except when a friend asks him to do it
This may be quite obscure
But he is pretty sure
That both his smart readers will quickly see through it

This is a weekly invitation to write a short piece of fiction (c. 150 words) based on a photo prompt (below) provided by Alastair.
Please click on the link to view a star-filled galaxy of night-time narrations by melancholy moon-gazers.
But please first read AnElephant’s laughable lunacy.

Copyright Al Forbes

Copyright Al Forbes

Full Moon

He parks by the river and enters the café by the back door.
Hi Des, he says to the waitress.
My name is Danielle, she replies, can I get you something?
Orange juice, please.
Certainly, sir.
Have you never been called Des before?
Only by my friends, she snaps.
When I first called you that I told you I wished I was 25 years younger. Now I am.
What?
I found a time machine, travelled back 25 years and sent myself here for you!
She calls to her colleague.
Becks, this weirdo is really creeping me out! Is it a full moon again?

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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8 Responses to Full Moon – Sunday Photo Fiction

  1. emmylgant's avatar emmylgant says:

    i loved it when I first read it…. why didn’t I say so?

  2. Lyn's avatar Lyn says:

    Never let an amateur loose with with a time machine; it will only end in tears.
    Very imaginative take on the prompt Mr AnElephant

  3. cindy knoke's avatar cindy knoke says:

    Enjoyed this!

  4. colonialist's avatar colonialist says:

    He simply chose a bad time.
    That’s what Des peration does for you.

  5. JED's avatar JED says:

    If your future self came back in time and told you what to do would you do it? That sounds like an interesting scenario.

  6. helenmidgley's avatar helenmidgley says:

    He should have put a bit more thought into it, time travel’s a young man’s game 😉

  7. He should have gotten her to write a note to herself to certify his identity. 🙂 Time travel can really help a love life along.

  8. Al's avatar Al says:

    Haha silly sod. She has no clue who he is. 🙂 He went back in time, not made himself younger

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