Surprise – Weekend Writing Prompt

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A word prompt to get your creativity flowing this weekend. How you use the prompt is up to you. Write a piece of flash fiction, a poem, a chapter for your novel…anything you like. Or take the challenge below – there are no prizes – it’s not a competition but rather a fun writing exercise. If you want to share what you come up with, please leave a link to it in Sammi’s Comment Section

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Surprise

He’s bigger than me.
Much bigger.
He’s a better fighter too.
He’s had a zillion scraps and never lost.
Well, obviously, ‘cos he’s not dead.
All I have is the element of surprise.
And a wee bit rope.
And a stone.
I shout at him.
Hey, Goliath!

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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17 Responses to Surprise – Weekend Writing Prompt

  1. AdeOluwa's avatar AdeOluwa says:

    Yesss. David defeating Goliath will always be a classic. And it’s a template to defeating impossibilities in our lives.
    Thank you!

  2. notestowomen's avatar notestowomen says:

    Armed with faith and some stones, David won the day. Fun retelling of a favorite.

  3. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    An enjoyably pithy retelling, I like David’s attitude.

  4. Dear CE,

    And the rest is history. 😉 A good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  5. Dora's avatar Dora says:

    That element of surprise won the day, thank God! 😀

  6. Corine Gouy's avatar Corine Gouy says:

    Vas y David ,tu vas l’avoir !

  7. You should sling your hook before he treads on you!

  8. jenne49's avatar jenne49 says:

    A wee gem of a story. I love it!

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