Friday Fictioneers is hosted by the wonderful Rochelle, the undisputed master of what I call Sound Bite Fiction.
She sets the weekly challenge, the standard, and the prompt photo.
The idea, as always, is to write a story of around 100 words based on the picture below, which this week is supplied by the lady herself.
© Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Click here to hear the author read his words:
Tears on Glass
Whenever your beloved Emmy departed on a trip, you graciously tolerated my presence in your home.
But you clearly disapproved of my physical condition, walking me four times each day.
Being wakened by a huge hairy head breathing on my face was an unforgettable experience.
Many times.
To your obvious amusement.
I know you were old and in pain.
I understand you were a dog, with a shorter lifespan, and this is the natural order of things.
I know you lived a full life, and that it was your time to go.
None of this stops the tears.
Adieu, mon ami.
mon ami Eros © c e ayr
Sad a beautiful.
Sad but true tale of how our fur friends become our fur kids but are here for a shorter stay than we’d like to accept. Beautiful words describing the heartache of loss. R.I.P. Lil Buddy.
Isadora😎
Loss is heartbreaking, farewell to a faithfully companion is never easy. For a child, the loss of a favourite toy may seem like the end of the world – but it is a life lesson for future grief.
Wise words, James. Thanks for sharing.
I’m so sorry for your loss, CE. What a beautiful tribute to a treasured friend.
Thank you, Brenda, much appreciated.
what a moving tribute.
Thanks, Plaridel
Wow! Such a sweet, sweet story, CE. Man’s best friend is always going to be there in memory.
Thanks, Kent, and they are all good memories
So sad, a lovely tribute.
Thanks, Ali
I’m sorry to hear this, CE. It must be a big loss. The second stanza is very truthful emotionally.
Big loss, happy memories, Penny. Pleased that it touched you.
So sorry to read this. We all go through it, and we never handle it any better on second and subsequent occasions. Nice tribute.
Thank you, Sandra. He was the third long-lasting dog love in my life, and no easier to handle than the first.
A touching tale indeed, no pun intended.
Thanks, Keith
I’m so sorry to hear of your loss, My lab Hovis had to be put down a couple of years back, he was 15 1/2 and was my work colleague as well as my mate, sad times but a beautiful take.
Just as an aside, I don’t suppose you can see mine can you? I’m 29 this week, I had to edit it because some of my intro was really small font, and its gone greyed out. The font remains the same too, (a lesser known Led Zeppelin album!)
Thank you, sir.
And we have already discussed your font, probably more than is proper between gentlemen of a certain age!
I’ve solved the 29 issue. I was position number 29. I’ve only been in the top 10 once on Friday Fictioneers. It appears to me at 9am in a Wednesday morning and I think about what I can write when I’m at work, by the time I’m ready tons have written their pieces. I quite like to see if I can beat Dale Roberson, not sure why, no one seems to care much! Iain Kelly gets the top spot often, but I find it fascinating that Rochelle doesn’t always come first. I wonder if anyone else thinks this way?
Ah that position 29, not the one in the Kama Sutra, I was momentarily impressed! It’s all about time zones, obviously, so the Scots, being an advanced nation, often fill 3 of the top 4 or 5 slots. And Rochelle is always first, just not on the board, because she is in dodo-land at what I have taught her is numpty o’clock. I would be cautious about beating Dale Roberson (sic) as she is a toothless Amazonian Canuck who would break both your arms without blinking. As for your last question, I suspect that most of us have weightier issues on our minds, like whether to have strawberry jam or raspberry jam on our baguette this morning. But who knows…
Kama sutra? With my back!!
Oh, I’m so sorry. We had a German Shepherd growing up. She was my sister’s dog, really, but we all loved her. I remember the absolute heartbreak when the pooch had to be put down – she’d fought coyote at night, to protect our livestock, and she was too wounded to live on.
Dogs can be heroes and caregivers and family.
I’m so sorry for your loss!
Thank you, Na’ama.
I agree that dogs are many things to many of us.
My condolences and support …
I’ve said goodbye to too many dogs. You had me in tears with this one. Well done, C.E.
No more tears, Linda, only good memories
I know that pain all too well. I tell people, “The only time I cry is in the vet’s office.”
I can relate to that, Nobbin
Animals have a way of worming their way into our lives and our hearts. Some people say, oh, it was just a cat or oh, it was just a dog. Nicely done.
Thank you, Alicia, you are so right, and there is no ‘just’ when it comes to love, is there?
Oh CE! This was so moving and terribly sad as one dog lover whose been left behind to another. I’m so sorry for your loss and send my love.
Best wishes,
Rowena
Thank you, Rowena, it hurts every time, doesn’t it…
It does. Our Bilbo died three years ago and I wrote three posts about losing him about a month ago. He will always be with us.
Beautiful tribute to a beautiful and faithful friend. So sorry for your loss.
Thank you for your kind words
Ohhh… So sorry Eros is no longer of this world. My condolences as I know you loved spending time with him. Condolences to Emmy as well.
Beautifully done.
I have written often of our adventures, he was a source of great joy in my life.
And thank you for thinking of Emmy
“None of this stops the tears.” Thinking of my dogs.
Thanks, Danny
“Though you have deperated,
you’re with our soles,
For, forever you hold a deep, dear role.”
A great tribute to your dog, who must be proud to get an owner like you.
I was proud to be his friend
It is rather a sad time when a well loved dog departs. Your tribute was powerful felt
Thanks, Mike, based on powerful emotions
Nice tribute CE, sorry to hear of your loss.
Cheers, Iain
Oh, what a story – and surely based on a real experience? Beautifully done.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
He departed at the beginning of the week, Susan.
Thank you
Dear CE,
I know how much Eros meant to you. Once more you’ve made my heart ache. Sweet tribute to a good friend.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you, m’lady, he has starred here many times with his humour and wisdom!
I will miss his teachings.
I knew it was about a dog.
They become a part of family. Tough to bid goodbye…
Thanks, Anita
There is sadness and joy here. Nicely done.
Celebration of a wonderful life, sir!
I never had a dog but I can still relate to it.
Thank you, JJ
These separations are traumatic, to say the least…
Indeed they are, Reena
Aww I had a German Shepard as a kid. I still mourn for her. The poem hits home. Forever in the heart.
That’s the truth, Tannille, thank you
A lovely tribute
Cheers, Neil