The Shop – Unicorn Challege

Copyright Ayr/Gray

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Maximum of 250 words.
Based on photo prompt.
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The Shop

The street is narrow, deep in the heart of the old town.
I’ve passed along here often, so I’m rather surprised I haven’t noticed this shop before.
It’s a strange-looking little place, outside and in.
Curious, I step through the doorway and browse around, fascinated by the odd product on display – paintings, objets d’art, masks and other strange, vaguely occult pieces I don’t quite understand.
An elderly lady with a kindly face suddenly materialises beside a surprisingly-angled row of shelves, and asks if I need help.
Startled, I say thanks, but no, then ask how long they’ve been here.
Just today, she replies.
I laugh, indicating the packed shelving.
There are so many places, she says, we can’t stay longer.
Somewhat confused, I move away.
She reappears a short time later, says she needs to close now.
When I tell her I’ll be a few more minutes, she becomes agitated.
She presses me to leave immediately, before it’s too late.
But I’ve just spotted the ideal gift for my wife so, impatiently, almost impolitely, I brush her aside.
Yes, it’s perfect, I decide.
I’ll leave as soon as you wrap this, I smile at the lady.
Her ancient eyes wrinkle with concern as she tells me the shop’s closed, that I need to stay until morning.
Irritated, I thrust the item into her hands and, ignoring her frantic pleas, throw open the door.
Outside is dark swirling nothingness.
The street, the town, the world, have all disappeared.

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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12 Responses to The Shop – Unicorn Challege

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    I knew there was a reason I did not like shopping! UGH!!

    • ceayr's avatar ceayr says:

      I don’t think it’s always this hazardous, Violet, although I admit I’m not a big fan either.

      It’s something I keep avoiding until the cupboard is bare!

  2. Liz H-H's avatar Liz H-H says:

    Delightfully spooky, and just the place to stop in before All-Hallows!

  3. One thing’s for damn sure: I’ll won’t be shopping there!

    Another masterful write, CE.

  4. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Ooh and scary… nothing there. Nothing.

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  6. jenne49's avatar jenne49 says:

    The hints build up, the MC ignores them – the customer is always right…
    Except when he isn’t.
    A mystery spun in your signature rich language – a 250-word gem.

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