The Fence – Friday Fictioneers

AnElephantCant believe it
Another week has flown by
He needs an idea
For the Fictioneers
So that he does not get left high and dry

 Just write a 100 word story about this picture prompt.

Copyright Sarah Ann Hall

Copyright Sarah Ann Hall

Okay, guys, looks like this is it.
They are coming back again.
I suppose it was inevitable, now the weather has cleared.
They look as though they mean business this time.
They have a lot of equipment, most of it fatal to our species.
And not just the hand held weapons that rip us apart.
No, the chemicals do the real damage.
Those of us who got through the fence should be safe.
But it looks all over for the ones in here.
Good luck and goodbye, my brothers.
Yep, they are loading their sprays with herbicide.
WMDs for weeds.

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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33 Responses to The Fence – Friday Fictioneers

  1. I’d hate to think of what would happen if all the weeds got together. The rise of the Crabgrass Empire.

  2. Sarah Ann's avatar Sarah Ann says:

    It’s touch being a weed. This is a great take on the prompt.

  3. It’s tough when everyone is out to get all the weed and all the grass 😉

  4. elappleby's avatar elappleby says:

    Pity the poor weeds! You led me up the garden path with this one, elephant 🙂

  5. emmylgant's avatar emmylgant says:

    Love that POV.
    And the reality check, that some battles can’t be won but must be fought anyway.
    Show me poppies, daisies, cornflowers, buttercups, queen-Anne’s-lace and oodles of other flowers on the side of the road and we are looking at weeds…grass is better?
    Sorry. Off the soap box now.

  6. Shreyank's avatar Shreyank says:

    ha ha ha witty 🙂

  7. julespaige's avatar julespaige says:

    Don’t turn your back
    Or they’ll attack –
    Three magic beans
    Reach a Giant’s clouded kingdom scene
    But if you’re still here…
    Watch carefully as the poison ivy draws near…

    I’ve only got my continuing story this week here…
    So I’ll direct you to an unofficial photo prompted piece, enjoy:
    http://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2013/05/14/the-start-of-the-drought/

  8. EagleAye's avatar EagleAye says:

    Clever lad. I knew a twist was coming, I just didn’t know what it would be. Weeds was definitely unexpected. You set that up brilliantly.

  9. WMD for weeds. lol

  10. Now all those plants in forefront of the picture really do seem to be escaping. Well done!

  11. Dear Elephant,
    Makes one rethink about weeds. Nah…I still don’t like them in my lawn. Clever story, however. Unique POV.
    shalom,
    Rochelle

  12. The Real Cie's avatar The Real Cie says:

    Reblogged this on The Cheese Whines and commented:
    Cool story! I never knew a weed that obeyed a herbicide for long. 😉

  13. nightlake's avatar nightlake says:

    poor weeds.. a lovely fun read.. enjoyed this

  14. Penny L Howe's avatar Penny L Howe says:

    Weeds to some, flowers to others (a dandelion is still a flower to little Emma) another life form to the planet we share with them. I really like this one. The perspective and view, that of plant life. A view few too many take into consideration today! I also like the fact that the fence keeping the plants in was where the danger lay, not on the outside wilderness of the fence. Well conceived and written, thank you 🙂 xo

  15. colonialist's avatar colonialist says:

    So now that the spraying has started
    Let’s pray for the souls of departed!
    Well done for the manner in which you succeed
    In killing each weed in a hundred-word read!

  16. Alastair's avatar Alastair says:

    Haha I love that 😀

    • Oh, Al, no sympathy for the poor weeds?

      • Alastair's avatar Alastair says:

        A weed is only something that is in the wrong place. A rose can be a weed if it is a potato patch 🙂

        • Yes, I completely agree! I love dandelions in the wild (and I wouldn’t mind them so much in my lawn if they didn’t take over everything), but I don’t want them in the lawn. But grass in the garden is a weed. To steal a phrase: One man’s flower is another man’s weed. Or the opposite. 🙂

          janet

          • Alastair's avatar Alastair says:

            Makes me think of a phrase from a town I used to live in – and after typing it, I realised this was on AnElephant’s blog, so I can’t post it on here, I will on yours though Janet.

            My apologies to AnElephant

  17. Now where are the giant dogs going to pee.

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