Childhood – Haibun Thinking

AnElephantCant hide a dark secret
He feels that at this point it must be revealed
Michael’s photo is super
But AnElephant makes a blooper
He just cannot find a good rhyme for field

AnElephant makes another illiterate assault on this great weekly challenge hosted by his friend Al.
And he again thanks Al for his ongoing efforts with this site.
Please take a moment to check out this page to see some superb interpretations of the Japanese Haibun, a literary form which explores the relationship between the human experience and nature.

This week he chooses this quote as his inspiration:
“Grown up, and that is a terribly hard thing to do.
It is much easier to skip it
and go from one childhood to another.”
– F. Scott Fitzgerald

the teacher by anelephantcant

the teacher by anelephantcant

Childhood

When my daughter told me she was about to produce my first grandchild, I was pleased but not overly excited.
An absent and, sadly, too often uninvolved father, I did not expect to dally overmuch with the next generation.
Well, as it turned out, for a variety of reasons, I spent literally hundreds of hours in his company, mostly just one on one.
And he taught me more than anyone else in my life.
About puddles and trees.
And tadpoles and dinosaurs.
And big trucks and silly songs.
About Puff and frozen ponds.
About wobbly sticks and ice cream.
About trees and birds, museums and unmatched socks.
Double-decker buses and giraffes.
About magic and about laughter.
He taught me how to look at the world afresh again.
And to love life.
In short, (okay, not very!) he taught me to be a  child again.
So now, when I walk knee deep with rolled up trousers in the winter Mediterranean and people ask me if it is cold, I see his laughing face.
I smile, shake my head, and thank him for my life.

there is no cold
for a child
who is having fun

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About ceayr

A Scot who has discovered peace in a small town he calls Medville on the Côte Vermeille, C.E. Ayr has spent a large part of his life in the West of Scotland and a large part elsewhere. His first job was selling programmes at his local football club and he has since tried 73 other career paths, the longest being in IT, with varying degrees of success. He is somewhat nomadic, fairly irresponsible and, according to his darling daughter, a bit random. So, nobody’s perfect.
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6 Responses to Childhood – Haibun Thinking

  1. Bastet's avatar Bastet says:

    What a fantastic haibun – AnElephant has learnt the wisdom of childhood which we all grow out of for awhile until wisely we return … thanks to the young who guide us. Bravo!

  2. Nicely done good sir, our gkids give us a whole new perspective and i love that.

  3. Penny L Howe's avatar Penny L Howe says:

    So absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. Anelephantcant hide somethings when they are referenced by a very special little boy, and this is surely a case in point. Well done. I’ve tears in my eyes for the truth of it! xo

  4. Al's avatar Al says:

    AnElephantWrites an excellent Haibun
    One where the weather will always be mild
    And as everyone knows
    It’s a brilliant prose
    About a second time of being a child

  5. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner says:

    What a magical, and magnificent childhood! No one could ask or expect more than these beautiful memories! I love it – well done Elephant! Nan 🙂

  6. emmylgant's avatar emmylgant says:

    I can see you smile. And I love that.
    It is the gratitude that is woven throughout the haibun that makes it so good and touching.
    Beautifully done.

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