kaleidoscope by phil burns
A word prompt to get your creativity flowing this weekend. How you use the prompt is up to you. Write a piece of flash fiction, a poem, a chapter for your novel…anything you like. Or take the challenge below – there are no prizes – it’s not a competition but rather a fun writing exercise. If you want to share what you come up with, please leave a link to it in Sammi’s Comment Section
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Kaleidoscope
I call her Kaleidoscope.
She thinks it’s because she is beautiful, a treat for the eyes.
Whereas really she’s continually, annoyingly, mindlessly, changeable.
Sound Bite Fiction 
Funny!
Ronda
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Thanks!
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Now I can’t help but wonder what she calls you … 😉
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I can’t tell you that, Na’ama, this is a family blog!
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LOL!!!
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Yes. Well crafted. I find the short to be the most difficult. But I managed to prune off words to meet the task.
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Thanks, Bill.
I find, with so few words, it is easier to start with none and add them slowly
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I write them and then begin the culling process.
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I hope your kaleidoscope is not reading this 🙂
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She doesn’t have the patience…
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😀😀
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Ah, a lover of fine adverbs! And humourously, tersely witty as well. 🙂
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Only to make a light-hearted, jocular, amusing, point, Christine.
(See, adjectives too!)
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Blimey, you know her too!
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In my admittedly limited experience, Keith, she is far from unique
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Dear CE,
As I was mindlessly, pointlessly, aimlessly perusing the internet at numpty o’clock I read your kaleidoscope of 23 words and laughed out loud.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I am delighted, m’lady, to amuse you so much in so few words.
Thank you
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Nice. Do you need the last comma (the one after mindlessly)?
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Thank you, sir, glad you enjoyed.
I find I rarely need a comma, but I do, very often, take pleasure from their inclusion.
Debates on the Oxford Comma, for example, have raged for centuries.
I find such discussions continually, annoyingly, mindlessly, pointless.
But I like your question.
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Oops, I see now that you are, in fact, a lady.
My apologies for addressing you as ‘sir’.
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